I Can Edit Skills

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yeah I could completely see where this novel will develop.From it's name I thought that it could have had a lot of potential but sometimes MC's background matters more than a interesting power.This man is probably around 30 with a daughter.This novel is more about a cute girl journeying with her father going around the cultivation world than a man getting a power in cruel cultivation world.Its end is clear I have no hope for this novel.I don't why this novel is on trial read I think the webnovel deteriorating.

Huh... Not a lot of skill editing system genre around. I had read a few but have either limitation on how many time mc could do per realm or how high can mc push the limit. Reading from description in front, feels like a limitless type as long as mc is creative.

Oh wait, mc had limitation of needing cultivation technique first.. Well, nothing that mc can't solve with inserting omni-ish power...

It has been a few weeks since I liked a story premise well enough to write a review. This book has pretty good grammar and the sentences read well. It never messes up the genders. But the X and repeating same X where they need a different synonym or deleting the 'and X' is still a problem. Skill/Spell names have horrible inconsistency. Most of my 2 Star deduction is due to this. Also, a few too many tropes like 'pouring the whole bottle of pills' are here. This particular trope bugs me a lot. Respect the Pills!

probably one of the best for this trial........................................................................................................

Interesting story

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Definitely a different kind of story. This MC is actually old and has an adopted blind daughter. Unfortunately, I don't see much potential in the series. MC used up his system savings of around 30 years, just to obtain the technique to break into Foundation. With such an advanced age and troublesome daughter, the novel reads more like a slow slice of life story of a guy slowly getting stronger while taking care of a daughter that will definitely either get bullied a lot, or turn out to be a hidden super expert.

It's not bad per se, but also not very engaging.

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