I like it. The plot is 100% plot armor but this novel will be fun for lets say 50-150chapters. In long term it will not work unless author will have lot of original ideas.
This is a pretty good story and has a very light and Happy undertone to it. It is basically about a very strong guy whose Trying to make his way in potion selling. The only problems I have with it are the mc is way too passive and I get that it is his character but he sucks as a salesman. He can’t Negotiate At all and just gives massive discounts at random which puts me off. And the story has some bad grammar that could be fixed buy run ing it through grammarly.
Love it, my only complaint is having to wait for more chapters. The story and setting are very intriguing, I love the MC's ability and how it is developing. Eager to read more.
Writing style? It's a TEN, why? I like the way it was written in details. I'm not a fan of reading magical realism or anything that relates to fantasy but the author did a great job by letting the reader feel they are on scenes and I feel im one the scene. Keep writing
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