I found the concept intriguing, especially the cover with Olia striking her father, which was rather captivating. However, it's been challenging to proceed with the story. Here are my thoughts:
Positive aspects:
1. FL's indignation towards her disciple/father is quite compelling.
2. Flashbacks are well-integrated, not overwhelming with one long sequence.
3. The ML's cuteness is a delightful touch; though, it's expected that he'd be connected to the empire that wronged FL.
4. A side couple adds some intrigue, though it's marred by a spoiler (see below).
What made me disengage:
Spoilers:
1. The explanation for the FL's mother's resurrection after death is confusing. How can someone who passed away postpartum return to life, and how does she end up in the countryside when buried in the royal cemetery?
2. The revived empress seems to take over FL's identity, which feels off.
3. The empress, having no memory, still argues with the emperor, which lacks credibility.
4. The lack of depth in world-building stands out, especially considering the genre might not be a pure romance comedy. This issue extends to other works by the author too.
Overall, while there were some enjoyable elements, the inconsistencies and underdeveloped world-building made it difficult for me to continue.
I find the reincarnation tales that showcase the daily struggles of an adult consciousness trapped in a infant's body quite entertaining. It must be a frustrating experience, but it makes for an amusing narrative. The characters have captured my interest, and the occasional historical insights keep me hooked. I'm eager to see where the author takes this story next – it's definitely intriguing! 😊
More chapters than just a very few every day. Please author, your book is amazing and so good, that it is so sad that there is only two chapters every day.
Like everything else here, it needs to be edited. DON'T let that stop you from reading this fantastic story. The story is great and it has an ENDING! It doesn't have 256,753 chapters. Enjoy it and move on. 12l22s,2d
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Positive aspects:
1. FL's indignation towards her disciple/father is quite compelling.
2. Flashbacks are well-integrated, not overwhelming with one long sequence.
3. The ML's cuteness is a delightful touch; though, it's expected that he'd be connected to the empire that wronged FL.
4. A side couple adds some intrigue, though it's marred by a spoiler (see below).
What made me disengage:
Spoilers:
1. The explanation for the FL's mother's resurrection after death is confusing. How can someone who passed away postpartum return to life, and how does she end up in the countryside when buried in the royal cemetery?
2. The revived empress seems to take over FL's identity, which feels off.
3. The empress, having no memory, still argues with the emperor, which lacks credibility.
4. The lack of depth in world-building stands out, especially considering the genre might not be a pure romance comedy. This issue extends to other works by the author too.
Overall, while there were some enjoyable elements, the inconsistencies and underdeveloped world-building made it difficult for me to continue.