I liked the story. First I will talk about the things I liked, then I will talk about the shortcomings.The characters are well thought out. -The world background has an interesting and understandable layout.-The features of the system are well thought out and easy to understand. -The battle scenes are satisfactorily descriptive.Here are the points that I find missing.-It's a well thought out novel, but overall I found it a bit lacking in depth. Although mc has a painful and difficult past and says he can't trust people, he doesn't quite fit in.From my point of view, it would be more reasonable for a person who has been so hurt and bullied to be a little unstable when trying to get stronger for revenge.So I think a more wild personality should have come to the fore instead of unnecessary stuffing for it to be cool.I don't feel that mc has a completely distrustful image of the ducks chasing him according to his past life we learned.I liked the novel overall, better than other cliche reincarnation system novels.
The writing quality is great, but i'm not so sure about the story development as the MC getting OP to early, which typically doesn't bode well for later chapters .. but that only apply if it is a typical system story. It would be a pleasant surprise if the story is going an original route, but until then i think 3.5 stars is a fair rating.
I like to torture people with bad jokes, so this novel is just for me! Don't take the story too seriously like the other salty bitter reviewers, just check if you like this kind of humour, as this novel is a comedy.
I don't know why people aren't reading this novel. The writing and story a very good compared to most of what I see on WebNovel. I can't say whether the concepts here are unique ,but at least they aren't common and overused, like many novels these days. I wish more people would notice this novel, as I am worried it will be dropped by the author soon due to lack of views.
This is an absolutely amazing book written by an amazing Author.The writing quality is very good, the story development and character design is also passable.And the world background is simply mind-blowing.I sincerely recommend it.Nice one Anone👏
It was a freaking good book. I liked how it went and the scenes were so clear. It really i.pressed me more than I was initially expecting. It exceeded my expectations.
I dare you to give this story a try. There's a really interesting story here. A genuine slice of life story that paces itself working with a system concept. The story seems developing well. Overall, this story is a compelling read.Personally, I like a little bit more depth to my characters as well as my world building. Slice of life fiction is not really my cup of tea either. ^-^;;I hope you keep up the great work.
Gotta rate, The story is good and been reading all the chapters for a single day, when’s the next update though.............................................................
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