Hello MLB, how are you doing ? I'm wondering what is happening to you ? I saw that you also stopped to release any new chapters on your other story since some times ago.Is it possible for you take make a small note at the end of the next chapter to explain why the release have dropped that much since 1-2 month ago. Did you get a problem recently ? I hope everything is fine for you, also i wanted to tell you the new arc of the story look great. Thanks for your hard work to make all those good stories.
This is translation review, not novel review. If you are not familiar with it, webnovel has started westernizing most of the novels in 2021. This is awful practice that kills original novel. At best you get only names, places and organizations westernized and at worst you get half novel gutted and other half totally rewritten by translator. With best case scenario you get only names, places and organizations westernized which introduces plotholes cause while names are westernized, actual writing and character culture arent. You get chinese way of thinking, chinese places and organizations translated into most famous western (USA) alternatives and as a result you see absurdity.And with the worth case scenario, you are not actually reading original authors work, but some "translators" plagiarization cause half novel is removed (sometimes critical explanations) and other half is badly rewritten. And cause this requires so much work compared to normal translation, either webnovel is stealing original authors work and rewriting it (cause most of those novels dont come from qidian) or they are just using translators that dont know chinese so they are rewriting story with help of MTL (seen too many edited MTL translations lately on webnovel). overall any westernized novel deserves automatic 1 star review.
As a person who also love games especially RPG's. This is truly a relatable fantasy to be imagined with, people like me who did not have the opportunity to become a pro-gamer or wish to become one, can treasure this masterpiece and enjoy it's journey to become champions and feels like we are too. I really recommend these. Thanks for the author and the translators as well.
Wow, that synopsis was great! I had to take a moment to get my thoughts out about this book, as I'm reading it; A great read it is! I'm enjoying the storyline, the characters! everything! excited to see where it goes
I'm not giving up on my passion but I feel that this story needs a different style of writing, different from webnovel format. I understood after writing for the past two months that this story can truly shine only when I develop the entire plot and plan ahead into the future to fully show the intelligence of Aons and their technology. Many of you might have noticed that I had cut corners at many places like not introducing the characteristics of races or just using regular tropes like lizardmen; this was done due to lack of time to think of names and create unique creatures, there is also a lack of character development and supporting roles to make the story more diverse. I really want to complete this story but my current capabilities are inadequate especially in character interactions.
"To where your Father, Navaneil Tombs, went to become a trained killer. I did some research on your family to make sure I got a clean kill. I even watched you take down that bully at school. You have a choice, I won't force you."
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