****,,,this is garbage, [I dont like rape],,,,,,,,,,its exactly like the tags,,,,be warned.....writer goes through with what he promises,, the MC is a rapist
The chps are long, the writing quality is decent, and SD is okay......, just gave 1 star to CD cause MC is trash, like dude is a rapist, yes I am bias, but to be fair, I just feel sad for the lost potential cause of the rapy MC,,,I mean dude is raizel from nobelesse.....would've been a dope SI.
**: if yah write about a not rapy MC, maybe a proper villain [not nut like joker but villian like....Mr.cold or someone with purpose or something], or a proper SI FF, rather than a perverted MC...do tell me...anyway GL author
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Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hypnosis stories are always welcome here. I hope that you will keep on writing chapters. Mind control is very rare in here so I am very delighted to see a novel like this.
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The chps are long, the writing quality is decent, and SD is okay......, just gave 1 star to CD cause MC is trash, like dude is a rapist, yes I am bias, but to be fair, I just feel sad for the lost potential cause of the rapy MC,,,I mean dude is raizel from nobelesse.....would've been a dope SI.
**: if yah write about a not rapy MC, maybe a proper villain [not nut like joker but villian like....Mr.cold or someone with purpose or something], or a proper SI FF, rather than a perverted MC...do tell me...anyway GL author
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Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.