Husband’s Night

Celene spoke, settling it. "We can try."

Only shooting stars break the moldSomebody once told me the world is gonna roll me

The water's getting warm so you might as well swim

A soft 'plop' sound was heard as a drop of liquid hit the ground. Soon, there was another plop sound, seeming as if Future Gonan was crying, but there was only one plop sound at a time. Realizing that his pupil was crying, he put a hand on her shoulder in an attempt to cheer her up, "I'm sure you didn't kill Gohan-"

"Assistant!" the doctor shouted again.

Absolute dog shit  of a novel might as well  stop writing this and start on a new project which il make sure to stay clear from. Absolute dog shit plot,  mild NTR with  sole bullshit plot on him still loving her when she cheated on him . Like if she really loved   Christ then she would have never  kissed him in the first place and god knows what woulda happened if christ didnt see that  shit novels like this is why i like to read on pirated website as atleast my money is intact while u can steal the time i wasted reading this and the emotional damge and stress reading  some have assed novel which had spelling mistakes everywhere and to top it off with the  cuckery. Can tell you that you with how your writing the novel fix up if u want to make it big otherwise find another hobby as novel writing aint for  yah  absolute dogshit plot this is . I have a dozen more things to say but il leave it at that for now

I'm waiting for read the next chapter. But your publishing was tooooo late. But i really interested to read your novel.Truly a suspense thriller.

The things I want to clarify with my readers are that when I refer to 1 Earth year, it equals 100 years in the realm. This part is not very important because it's just for the first chapter, so you can understand the difference between them.Another point is that I made the main character strong because, let's be honest, I'm not interested in writing 1,000 chapters for him to go from weak to strong. I’m writing this so my main character can provide guidance to others, just as my readers will guide me. He will be a sect leader, and I want him to teach how it works. I also aim to make it a sci-fi type of cultivation manhua.

I'll say it's good the idea is quite unique and rare to see such a new storyline today with such a unique way and I'll say it has quite the potential so let's see what the author is selling  in his goured.