Hunt/Dreams

Man this novel is slow asf, I'm recently started the chapters, currently at chap 30 but i already felt bored.........................................

This is one good story ngl. the story unique plot with well written characters and with a good pacing. it is not your generic system so do give it a try. the only flaw I could find till now r the grammatical mistakes and the writing style. there a few mistakes here and there and the writing style is average. but I have a feeling that the author improve so don't let that drop this novel. that's it and i look forward to your works.

Shouldn't have expected much but geez I was disappointed, thought it'd be like TKA but it's not. Gameplay is lackluster with the peanut gallery taking up most of the chapters saying he's so good and impossible etc. Characters are even more lackluster, we have an annoying MC that won't leave his sister alone and is noisy. Sister is probably a Tsundere(I could be wrong) I guess people who think this is 5 stars must have been ruined by MTL that made them unable to properly judge a novel.

Thank you for writing this book, I think there is some punctuation mistake but still tolerable and enjoyable✨✨✨✨✨

please try more chapters as I will be very happy with you continuing it as it is quite interesting and would like to see where it can go till the end ALL THE BEST

Happy to see RVN is cooking a cultivation novel. I shall read in due time.

"Son, your name is Kang Dae."

"You look so delicious. Mind if I take a taste?" He made her lay on the bed that was in the room and took his clothes off. Lily's eyes got wide from seeing a dick for the first time. She struggled to turn into her demon form faster.