Lol! I am actually scared to write comments in this novel. All the people here hate me... I think. But anyhow, great story. I am loving it. Good job. 👌👌🤟
I really like the main character, Mayar, his charisma, kindness, and leadership skills really do help in making the things that the boys accomplish not seem too unrealistic. I've also noticed that your writing has greatly improved since the beginning. It seems you've gained some confidence and have a clear end goal for the novel. The only thing I would suggest is giving the other characters more screen time because right now everything seems to revolve around Mayar. It makes liking the other characters difficult. Other than that one complaint, I am greatly enjoying the novel and hope for many more chapters!
If you have problems in your daily life you should find it compelling. please read.and don't forget to give reviews.Both good and bad reviews are welcome and if you want to give some advice it's also welcome.
I woke up in the same classroom and the first thing I feel is hunger; Like really bad, I feel like I could 1 whole turkey in one sitting. Before I can complain about my hunger problem I heard a series of stomach complaining to their owner including mine. Our helper in the classroom told us that food are already prepared in the cafeteria and we can go straight home after we eat.
Golden Hall Realm cultivators instead molded the Perception Force into Spiritual Perception, and they were able to comprehend the Heaven Dao a step further.
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