Okay, I'm all caught up (So far Till Chapter 19), and I have to say, it's been an interesting read.
The author's use of narration is unique and the characters are interesting. The beginning also gets you hooked.
The line between good and evil is blurred, and I somehow find myself wondering what will happen next.
This isn't five stars since the author doesn't upload on a daily basis. I hope that changes.
Still, though, good job!
Clarity your writing needs Clarity. You have major show vs tell problems. Your dialogue needs work too. Trust me I've been there practice engaging the senses and inner thought and the story will shine
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The author's use of narration is unique and the characters are interesting. The beginning also gets you hooked.
The line between good and evil is blurred, and I somehow find myself wondering what will happen next.
This isn't five stars since the author doesn't upload on a daily basis. I hope that changes.
Still, though, good job!
What do you expect from this novel?...
Well, this novel is a perfect bedtime material to pass off time as it contains a lot of mysteries...and makes you feel the adrenaline rush.
Overall, a good novel to pass off time and a coin-worthy novel.... If you are a perv pls stay away, this one isn't meant for Ya......