Human Federation

Amazing imagination. I am afraid that such things could really happen in the future. Who knows. The story is great and you get into it really fast. Great work author

I give you five stars,  because you observed it. Your story and book tittle are so nice. I hope and pray for you to be[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins] success.

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Its good..................................................................................................................  ..................... updates pls

Nice work author you did good work here pls keep it up ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ hoping to read more❤❤ you novel let me speechless

Well i am not really into sci fi genre but this book has made a mixture of both, but as i said i cannot really judge it form a sci fi point of view.

The writing's got room for improvement (as others here may have noticed), but as of this review's posting, whatever flaws were present don't detract from the content itself too much. Additionally, it may be best to limit allusions to existing works in pop culture to a minimum. I particularly recommend looking up comma splices, run-on sentences and sentence fragments on Google since these are the common mistakes I came across in your work.

PS - if you'd like a more detailed go-over, kindly PM me over Discord or something :)

Did an overview seems nice....The story development and all I think it will be a nice read .....keep writing.....wish you all the best for your next enaveduars..