Human Cultivation

As i already said in some comment chapter if you can go past the Stupid MC and his slow growth then you will enjoy this novel but for me when you write a novel it's about MC and the development of the stories to support him but here their not that just a good storirmes with a trash MC if someone can go past chapter 20 he can make a review and tell me what he think of this MC because even if author said he want to build MC character ut destroy the enjoy of the storie because all you do is reading a stories with no good MC so how can the stories advance at the end make your own idea if you can past chapter 9 and not insult him then you are strong but it's not for me waste of time .
And me who was expecting a MC not OP but no so trash i am utterly crushed.

Im gonna level, the intro on this story... isnt great.

The pace is great (rare for a WN, so good job) and the characters have a nice foundation; but I cant believe it, for an disaster novel it lacks authenticity. There are so many cases where common sense flies out the window and the established world rules are disregarded (any scene involving the elevator is just a big box of stupid).

Its like Im reading a first draft of an inexprinced author; this being a WN I’m probably not wrong. A second draft or editor would improve things drastically on this front, but its not unreadable by even by WN standards. Just dont think to hard about the technical side of the world building.

Beyond that Theres...
Good
The premise is interesting,
the tension is present,
and it has great growth potential for both the story and author.

Bad
A bit heavyhanded with the early messages, could have been done in a more natural way,
lots of telling but little showing (chapter 4/5 is mostly just infodumps),
The characters all start off as stupid. The MC in particular leaps past dense and dashes for the label of braindead. Thats ignoring his moral compass and naivr begining.

Its far from a masterpiece on an execution basis; but the author has enough ideas to make it an interesting, if occasionaly infurating, ride.

This novel in one sentence :

Everybody gangsta until the novel says based on a true story

one of the reasons I started to read this novel was because there was "cultivation" in the tags, I'm already in chapter 17 there still no sign of cultivation in the story.
I just wanted to ask in what chapter is cultivation going to be introduced.

Amazing work author
The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers .I liked this novel very much.
At last the novel is overall good and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come . [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Really enjoying this story! The action and horror scenes are gripping and intense, the prose flows nicely. The descriptions are vivid and you can picture yourself in the scene. The characters are interesting and three dimensional. Keep up the good work! Looking forward to reading more.

When I first started reading I was so confused. But as I slowly read more and more I fell in love with the books it’ so good. There’s so many twists and turns in the book. It really plays with your emotion at one point you can feel you heart beating because or Layla and Zane and then you actually feel scared because of the events. Overall this book and author deserves more attention

dam it 2020, if you are looking for some story where mc struggle like dog the you have come to the right place, this bok is waiting for you to explore...just it have so many emotions packed in one chapter