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Nice story, good job author! I like the book. I can’t help but be intrigued

Overall, it’s a fantastic novel, but for my taste, there’s a bit too much drama. There’s a lot of hesitation, self-doubt, and back-and-forth that felt a little excessive. The story itself is solid, but the drama at times felt overwhelming. The character even doubts himself to the point of taking on responsibility for all the world’s problems, even though it’s not his fault. It’s still a great read, but there are a lot of intense, almost psychotic moments without a clear backstory to explain them. I get that it’s a stylistic choice, but the character’s eyes are described in a way that makes them almost supernatural, even though the story itself doesn’t really include any supernatural elements. There’s no explanation for why the character is in this state before the events of the story begin, which left me wanting a bit more context. I think the drama could be toned down a bit—at least, that’s my take on it.