Let's see here....The story line is good but the writing style and paragraph progression is some what choppy. It's great if you can reorganize sentence and paragraph structure on the fly to make them more sensible. It doesn't deserve the harem or romance tags yet though since his whole thought process revolves around staying single and the girls fall for him on their own. Each one has their own reasons and some of them have no explanation at all but, since he doesn't actively persue anyone, those tags don't apply.
Great stories. I have now read all of the authors stories and I haven't been disappointed yet. I love the fact that her stories are not long and drawn-out stories.
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