As of now it's a good story.... But we're only at the beginning and don't know much about the MC and the world....But what you can say though is that the world has a strong potential really.... Update stability : No problemWriting quality: No problemEditing : No problemThis story overall seems quite slow paced which I really love, yet the author succeed in making each chapter useful for the story. At least as of now.Only downside : I find the fights a bit too long for my taste but it's still alright...So give it a try !
Just face it dear author, No one fucking cares about sun, a beta, characterless and boring **** that you are forcibly trying to make into the male lead when its clearly just going to ruin the damn story
This started out as an interesting novel but rapidly dropped into mediocrity. The novel is done first person and really I think that this is what kills it. He overthinks, waffles on about being low key and not bringing travesty down upon himself and family and basically this just makes a person lose interest with the character in general. When reading, it really does not give the reader a sense of connection and feels like instead I am reading a shopping list of things to do. The MC tends to wander in descriptions and goes off on tangent when suddenly, skips back by commenting he was going off topic or was wandering.One particular detail the author uses is continually bloating word count with status screen information, it is used often and virtually the list is so long, filled with skills etc, that I just skip way past it. It isn’t needed and I am sure that this could be handled in a simpler manner.Basic synopsis MC is reborn into a world as the youngest son of a Viscount. Standard tropes are revealed, a marriage arrangement, receiving OP skills, miraculously surviving certain death scenarios, faction fighting within the family and of course earning the enemity of a potential protagonist. There are other classic tropes included but just read and find them. A lot of his issues is his previous lifes morals and values etc, which are really not totally applicable in his current environment. Currently the MC is in a new world of much potential but he just seems to wimpy to me. (My opinion) his attitude towards slavery, to beast and monster summoning was to overthought and could have been handled far better, but again.. my opinion.I did give it a fair go, forget what chapter I made it to but in the end I decided enough and move on. Overall the concept is interesting, the section where he discovers the Nexus coukd have been done better and developed further but was never allowed to reach its potential.Anyways, a number of readers will like it and I do encourage those to decide for themselves if it is for them.
The owl skull buried itself back into the blanket with a lackadaisical response, "I don't care, kid. Your voice is annoying me so just shut up for a few hours."
"You try that,and the whole country goes Boom!I have the nuclear launch codes in my phone,and it has been set up so that the Nukes will go off if i do not set it off in 5 minutes!"I shouted,causing them to stiffen their bodies.
Before we could even get a chance to collect ourselves, the footsteps start to grow more audible. They're faint still but headed our way. God's, what have I done.
Langkahnya terasa berat, pikirannya seakan tidak ikut menggerakkannya. Tapi kini, tubuhnya benar-benar mematung. Diatas lantai yang dingin, seorang gadis terletak begitu saja. Tak bergerak. Pengunjung yang melihatnya langsung berteriak histeris, begitu juga dengan Eunna. Ketika ia mengetahui siapa yang sedang tergeletak disana, dirinya bagaikan diserang seribu serigala, tak berdaya dan pasrah.
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