The treasures he had launched to attack her, they had been easily stopped by the pedals surrounding her. They were far more powerful than the lotus mirage from before.
Story is little bit slow but concept is good. Good keep it up. This new your rewrite version is better than last you deleted. Let's say your story have potential to earn something.
Only two chapters in so far, and I'm stoked! Ryha has done such a great job providing vivid descriptions and with immersion, really pulling me into the world that's told through an interesting perspective!No complaints here!
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