To be honest I was expecting this story to be so much better in the first few chapters but as I kept reading it kept getting worse worse and worse. First off is just how annoyingly nerfed the mc is and author just keeps trying to nerf him more and more, the author keeps on repeating certain issues with the mc which shouldnt even be there anymore. The worst part is the hugeeee amount of useless information dump EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER literally nothing I would read 10 chapters to only get a normal chapter’s worth of good information. I kept trying to give this story a try but as I reached almost chap 60 I just gave up and dont want to waste anymore of my time.
This book is sucks in my opinion. I got to chapter 5 and past the part where he just got his angel assistant. Basically the keeps describing how beautiful she is and the is a part where she gets naked infront of the Mc to change her clothes BUT IT SAYS IN CHAPTER 4 HER AGE WAS SET TO 12 YEARS OLD😂💀. Kinda creepy but other than the novel itself is just meh. Its too generic, I hope it doesn't get picked
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After 250+ chapters, I'm back with another review update that will probably help many of you decide whether or not to read this novel.1) The first 50 chapters may have some minor grammatical errors (nothing too big). Beyond chapter 50, I've been trying to fix as many errors as possible but there might be a few (Yes, I'm a human being too. Surprise!).2) All my chapters are above average, i. e. 1600 words or more. (2 chapters per day = +3200 words.)3) This novel is NOT only about the virtual world. In the future there will be a lot of cultivation (Cultivation lovers, get on board! I promise an exciting ride!)4) Bored of stupid protagonists who let their enemies go for reasons of " kindness"? This is your story then, you won't regret it! Believe me, if you read more than 100 chapters, you won't be able to stop. 5) What are you doing here? Quickly go read the novel!
I don't always write reviews, but when I do, it's either because the novel is really good, or really bad. Despite all the positive reviews, in my opinion, this belongs in the latter.First of all, the positive. The world background is unique, and certainly above average. The relationship between characters is decent. Now, the bad things.The most important thing, the humor. While I did chuckled once in awhile, for the most part, it's just painful to read. The author tried too hard to force the comedy. The parts where it should be serious, the author still tried to add humor. All the Elders and Sect Leader acts like a bunch of 12 yearsold. There are certain situations where comedy comes from surprise or the suddenness of the situation. However, the way this novel is written completely take away the surprise part and ruin the humor. Most importantly, I don't know if it's the translator or the author, but using vulgarities to force the humor is just immature. Conversations between characters are completely devoid of witticism. Characters swore and cursed at each other is just...tasteless. Once in a blue moon, it sort of worked, but the rest of the time, it's just overdone and became vulgar instead. Sometimes, the vulgarities even ruined the part where it's actually funny. Let me give you an example, the MC were talking with a girl about how bad his Master was. The conversation were going just fine, then he dropped a sentence along the line "you might aswell tell me to masturbate over my Master getting gang raped"....It's not like i'm over sensitive, but it's just tasteless. That is just pure vulgarity, not comedy. If you want an actual humorous xanxia, try A Will Eternal. This novel is just a really bland and vulgar slapstick comedy.
The author needs to go back and fix his early chapters. He promises that MC improves later but it is of no use if a new reader gets too frustrated with Mc's lack of IQ. MC behaves like a retard and rages on the system like a Karen. There is no character development over the 90 days of training and the MC is still the same. He is confused about cultivation and reincarnation but later says that he is familiar with reincarnation novels. After he took a long time to understand stat points(which I will come back to) he is still confused about Skill points. How difficult is it to understand? He also impulsively decides to dump stat points in one stat just to get out. Why is he in a hurry to get out? What if there is danger outside like how the system mentioned? After getting outside he again ranges on the system for not replying to him when the system clearly said that it is updating. This was too stupid for me to continue.Please tell me that he is suffering from a debuff on his IQ due to his young master title because otherwise, his stupidness will be hard to explain. Don't say that he is new to the world and in shock. Shock lasts only for a short time, he should be able to adapt faster as a self-proclaimed nerd, plus it has been 90 days. The main reason I quit is because a reader who has read ahead said in the comments that this character and behaviour of MC persists for many more early chapters.
Two chapters were enough to lure me, the setting, the characters and story and thriller was soooo.goooood and very well done,gonna add this library no dount.
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