It's a little of a sign in story but also a money hungry system... Besides that I couldn't even make it to the double digit chapters. The MC made it impossible to continue. The power went straight to his head immediately. His actions and mindset just put me off starting with showing up to a job he hasn't been to in a week and acting like everyone should bow down to him because of his power level that NO ONE KNOWS ABOUT YET!
It's a bit challenging to my worldviews, since the author refuses to give us a magical reasoning, but. If you look past that, the novel's pretty cool.There's a few mistakes here and there, but it's not like the author's bad at english, they're just casual mistakes.Anyhow, looking forward to the new chaps.
That's easy. Marry the son to the sister, encourage the boy to start a harem. This will automatically annoy the sister/wife who will complain to the father/father-in-law. The MC's cultivation is the same as the father-in-law's because they are the same person, so by the rules of the system he needs to overcome himself. End result a family more united than is necessary, the son with a harem, nobody needs to leave the house, a super strong MC, Sweet home Alabama soundtrack. And a daughter no one cares about after all, female characters disappear after marriage, a side effect of jade skin after the loss of chastity.
Good plot, interesting story line, good character development. Hooks the reader from the first chapter. Likes the way the author despicts her characters and the flow of the story line perfect. Looking forward to more updates from the author. Kudos, keep it up
"U-Um.. " Mariko also wanted to play along with the 'looking for the hero' part so She didn't told them that. "Um.. I will really train you hard, Chiho!" She said, surprising the two at the sudden change of topic. "S-She told me that them Proharovkyans really have a strong intention of conquering the world! So, We must help our soldiers to fight, right? Ayumi-chan?!" Mariko's swift words effectively moved them to that topic. "Yeah! Pfft.." Ayumi nodded and snickered. "Proharov..KYAN!" She shouted. "H-Hey.. I can't remember the name properly, so i made up some letters.." Mariko looked at her. "Fuhehe..." Ayumi giggled. "I don't get what's so funny about what i'm saying.." Mariko sighed. "I think Ayumi-chan thinks you are joking sometimes. I, Too, also thinks you do.. Like when you said that, that Prohorovkan girl wasn't loved by her parents and was given an ugly name.." Chiho explained, There was a hint of giggling when she mentioned what she had said. "It's not a joke if i didn't laugh.." Mariko seems irritated. "Whatever.. Let's move on.." She thought of something. "Alright-" A knock from the door interrupted her, Chiho moved towards the door and opened it a bit. "Yes?" Chiho peeked through the gap and asked the soldier standing on the other side. "Chiho-san, Gentaro-sama wished to say to you that you should always be aware of your things, That's all" The soldier didn't gave a time for Chiho to even react and quickly turned to leave. She remained there for two second to think before closing the door.
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