Great book in terms of world building and realistic characters, there are some big issues with spelling and grammar as well as the characters lack of imagination to the point where the readers feel embarrassed for him. Worth a read purely because of the world building
The author struggles to make something original so he sticks to the same process of mc gets bullied > mc gets powerup > mc kills the bully > bully's relatives avenges the bullies > mc kills the bully's relatives > repeat. It's fun for the first few cycles, but it gets bland as it goes. Although the novel follows the same progression of "doing something new for a change," it's actually basically just a coverup of the fact that the author is incapable of further developing something thus scrapping it and making a new one, on the premise that the story is "developing" when clearly, it's just making a new slate to follow the same cycle, of which only the names of people, places and realms changed.
Ah yes, the infamous Zap and Medusa.I don't know how I got hooked on your novel this easily. Prob because I play League. Take my five stars. Damn you.Jokes aside, I couldn't find anything wrong with the novel. Real thoughts, fluid conversations, toxic adcs... Everything feels so real. There's nothing to criticize for me.Patiently waiting for new updates.
I would like to address one review below. it ain't ntr if they're not in a relationship. Apart from the mc being Somewhat wimpy and the first few chapters being a somewhat tough reality check on the mc(you can't expect everyone to suddenly staart liking you)the story is quite good. Give it a shot.
Author here, it's hard to make an exemption on my mistakes here so I'm criticized my book too. I rather want to be truthful to myself that trying to lie. By the way thanks to those who still look at this book, promise it'll be good of you still wait.
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