His Devilship CHHHAAANNN~

"No, she was always home, she just didn't like to cook," I started trying to think of something to say to veer the conversation away from my parents.

Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running

The grammar is bad, really bad, one of the worst ive seen on here. Not to mention theres no real flow to this “novel” and its all over the place.

I Understand this novel is about the path towards brcoming a villain but once an actual person makes up their mind and reincarnates, why would they think about their past actions in their previous life? Also

TL:DR, read it bruh!Mr_LonelyOne delivers a thrilling dark fantasy cultivation novel with The Tale of the Demonic Sword God, where revenge, power, and fate intertwine in a gripping narrative.Plot & StorytellingThe story follows Mo Wuyuan, a man betrayed by the so-called righteous sects and left for dead. His transformation from despair into a force of destruction, aided by the Crimson Veil, is both compelling and chilling. The novel excels at portraying his descent (or rise) into a demonic path, using forbidden cultivation techniques and eldritch alchemy to reshape his destiny. Each chapter maintains a steady pace, with action-packed sequences and intricate world-building that keep readers hooked.Character DevelopmentMo Wuyuan is a protagonist who commands attention. His tragic past, white-haired transformation, and ruthless determination make him a fascinating anti-hero. He isn't just another villainous cultivator, his quest for vengeance feels personal and justified, making readers both fear and root for him. The supporting characters, though limited in early chapters, add depth to his journey, especially those from the hypocritical sects he seeks to destroy.World-Building & Cultivation SystemThe novel introduces a unique cultivation system blending demonic arts, life-altering alchemy, and reality-warping formations. The concept of the Crimson Veil as a sentient artifact that fuses with his soul is intriguing and adds a supernatural horror element. The setting, particularly the frozen wastelands and ancient ruins, creates an atmosphere of desolation and rebirth.Writing Style & PacingMr_LonelyOne’s writing is immersive, balancing vivid descriptions with intense action. The pacing is strong, rarely dragging, though some early exposition could be streamlined. The fight scenes are brutal and satisfying, capturing the essence of a revenge-driven cultivation tale.Final ThoughtsIf you enjoy dark cultivation novels like Reverend Insanity or Warlock of the Magus World, The Tale of the Demonic Sword God is a must-read. Mo Wuyuan’s journey into the abyss of power and revenge is exhilarating, and with only 10 chapters so far, it holds immense potential. I eagerly await the next developments in this ruthless saga, OMFG!🔥 Recommended for fans of dark fantasy, anti-hero protagonists, and cultivation revenge stories.