Hiding The Pregnancy, Leaving The Father But Keeping The Child—Reborn, I Won’t Chase After Him Anymore

I suddenly removed her hand. She froze not knowing what I wanted to do. I placed my cock near her mouth:「 Come, lick it for me!」

Ah damn, I was hoping a romance would blossom for Alex in this chapter. Maybe someday, hmm a new Cortana like character that supposedly helps him out. Where he slowly enjoys her company so much he asks the system if there was something to give her a real body. Finds out it is an absurd price and that is a long term side goal for him. An AI partner that he flirts a little with promising her a new body. Oops got off track in my own pink world for him. Long story short super disappointed. Bad Author, Bad SKY702!

is there smut in it ? and in which chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This story has some seriously strong atmosphere.The writing is really vivid and cinematic, which makes the action scenes feel alive and intense. But at the same time, it leans a little too heavily into dramatic prose in almost every paragraph, which can make the impact of the big moments blur together. Not every line needs to be poetic (I do the same mistake) sometimes the simple stuff hits harder when it’s surrounded by quieter beats. Also, while the characters are intriguing their internal voices could be more distinct. Right now, the narration style feels a little too similar across the board. The worldbuilding is rich, but there are a few moments where exposition dumps slow things down or feel a bit crammed in. Letting more of the world unfold through natural character moments or dialogue might help the pacing. And speaking of dialogue, it could use a little more bite. A sharper edge or more personality in how characters speak would take the tension up a notch. Overall, though, it’s a strong start with real emotional depth and a lot of promise. With some polish, this could really shine.

It's quite good anyway. Keep it up I'll be checking your next chapter upload.