Hidden Marriage: Spoiled by the Imperial Commander

I renounce everything that contradicts with islamic law.............................................................................................

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It's terrible. Don't even try. Zero proof reading, incomprehensible dialogue, none of the characters have a functioning personality, and even the smut is poorly done.

You know I don’t wish to come off as a hater but so far iv read up to 10 chapters and all I can say is this book is trash

i think you should introduce past life litle bit to get more connection and also you should mention the age and body height and all other things.

On the other side of the lake, things took a bit longer.

"We'll need to leave our horses here. The path up the mountain is too narrow for us to bring horses."

I got angry. I slapped him hard. "I would never!" I yelled at him. Everyone looked over at us. I stormed off leaving him speechless. But as I walked down the hall with my arms crossed I heard him yelling behind me. He was calling my name. I ignored him and continued to walk. But he soon caught up.