Heroine Conqueror: I Level Up by Making Women Fall for Me

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Top story bro. top story bro. hhhhh it has been long time since I readed such an interesting story

Overall, this was a great read. The personalities of the characters have been perfectly meshed out in my opinion and the main cast are repeatedly shown, unlike some other novels where they just get forgotten or vanish for some time. The main character surprisingly has a brain which was a sharp contrast to the novels i have read till now. He doesn't hesitate to use his money, kill people, use his influence and relationships to his own benefit. I feel like the buildup of the first meeting of the mc and the fml is getting a bit dragged out but it's going to be resolved soon anyways. The world background is actually pretty good. I especially liked the unique magic system used in this novel which was pretty innovative as compared to the novels where the people simply have to imagine doing the magic or make some circles. The only problem I've had with the novel so far is the updating stability. The chapters are released at an extremely slow pace and there isn't even a fixed schedule for it. Only 2 chapters are released in a month which makes it look like it'll take years to even finally let Eva and Rayne meet. If the chapter release was even like 2 per week, I'd rate this a 10/5.

Good story! You actually made de mc loss of humanity seem realistic, considering the circumstances and all the characters feel alive too.The only bad thing about the story so far is that there are not enough chapters.

The writing works well and the development of the story works quite well. The world-building would be a bit more described but other than that, it's quite good.

Very good so far! I see a lot of potential in this........................................................

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I’ve really enjoyed this story so far. The idea is creative and unique, plus I’ve been craving a nonhuman story for a while so I gave it a five star. I don’t really have any clear cut criticisms so I’ll just share my thoughts. Thankfully the author has said there would be no harem. I also hope there won’t be romance either since it seems like it would be out of place in a story like this, though I suppose it wouldn’t be completely unwelcome. My biggest concern is that the mc will become physically or mentally more “human”, so I’m praying the author doesn’t go in that direction like so many other stories have. I would like to elaborate on what I mean by “human” but I don’t think I could explain it well in words. I think it might be simpler to say that I hope the mc stays alien to all things human, in both body and mind.