in the description, it says she has 3 children. The next paragraph is says lost both..probably a typo, but I thought I'd mention it since it is your 1st impression of your book
"Damn the lessons have already started! ... I'm sorry I should go, but thanks!" and ran out the door of her apartment ... Retsu appeared in a black tuxedo and with a glass of wine in his hand, greeting Riley's parents, Anancy Can looked at Retsu and said:
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