The characters so far have all been interesting, fun and engaging.The updates have been regular.Story in intriguing and has been developing well so far keeping me interested in what's to come.Only reason I didn't give the world 5 stars is just that there hasn't been enough time to flesh it out yet meaning so far it's been good, but not enough to say if it will become amazing, just stay good or become less good. Definitely interested in learning more about the world though.
I like this one ...it's the best fresh one out here....Nd pls have a request keep the reality in the like u r doin now...it's fine to that mc have power nd stuff but keep it like real nd most likely logical...Nd one suggestion to I would like since u have started a new from the start which is way better than old one ..so in this new don't just focus on one girl like I see in every novel now n then in heram which is that there's always a girl which important than other in mc eyes...which is disturbing...so pls don't make that mistake nd let the girls be unique without pointing to any importance...give the reasonable screening to every girl ...beacuse there are so many examples in every novel I read that authers just forget abt some girls nd most of them are the milfs one like 35+ ones they got in relation have *** nd after that they just won't mention them or just metion them at rendomly ...it's annoying seriously..so pls if u can don't do that... don't skip the some daily life moment with them...cause then it will feel realistic...
it has a lot of good idea to do this and I felt it was the only way to make it work for a long period of the biggest thing that happened to me and I think it's just that the unicorns mostly are just like that and they braged
I have been reading this story from the very beginning. I wasn't too keen on it at first, but the writing became better and I started to enjoy it immensely. Keep up the great work Noona. I truly admire your talent.
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