The story is good and I can see that author is trying to balance the fantasy and reality and I appreciate the hard work. But I think, that the story is a little slow but that is covered up by the view presented by the author. I would say,good work author and keep it up. ✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
Great story so far. Looking forward to more, rated the world building at 4 because we still don't know much about it, but so far it's an amazing read with a unique view on the transmigration genre. The system, a.k.a. Lily, is great as well. Keep up the good work!
Not good. Chapter 10 our mc has not got his power. Boring. I thought mc's brother is the real mc. I donot like this story. I donot know what you think about it. First beast is dinosour. In my opinion it should be low grade monster not dinosour. I drop this story. Boring story.
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"Savage? You should never talk like that to a God. Your tongue was given to praise us, and since it doesn't seem to serve the purpose, let me take it off for you." The shadow is a young man, younger than Lu Yan.
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