This is a good story, it is well-paced with mysteries that leave the reader asking. However, the character design and world background need a little more work. The story development became better the more you read so it looks good so far. Keep on writing
While a psychopath protagonist might not be the most unique idea in the world, this novel could end up providing a unique experience when it comes to the overall culmination of all the elements with regards to storytelling. Will keep an eye out for the future chapters.
apart from the fact that for every movement and phrase of mΡ, I want to call him a moron (literally in every paragraph) and the fact that the hero himself does not represent anything (because he is a moron) without a call ... that is a completely readable work ..
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