Heir of Darkness: After the Fall of the Empire

Oh my Lord! The story is amazing! I like how the author describes the situation and the mood in the story! The characters are unique and written nicely! Good Job, Author!That's all for now!

                             Good novel!∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆∆

A decent story, but with shallow characters and cringe writing. Author also likes to over explain every little thing and it gets annoying fast.

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I love the character. He is cunning, logical and perfectly reflects his past. This is an underappreciated work and i think that this should be continued. I do not understand why this was dropped.

A high paced system novel... The writings are easy... not much vanity there. Readers can hook in immediate with the clear writings.The character tones is better than I expected. I only read about 3 chapters so can't tell about the story development. But the system looks promising.Now the problems I see in the readings... - you missed a lot of punctuations. tthere's apparently no comma or periods in the quotations. fixed it as soon as possible. -the story missed a bit of the depth in the beginning. readers would judge the story reading the very first chapter if they will continue or not. pay attentions to that. -descriptions. work on that. - pay attention to the little details...overall the book looks promising with a unique system... good luck

Your author hereThis story is build on modern day scenario, revolving around the struggle of a fresh graduate to seek justice for his mother while the female lead is rich stubborn heir of the Ling Business Empire, on some crucial point of his struggle, the male lead will found out his true identity...I think this is the only spoiler I can give for now..｡◕‿◕｡

Loving the story so far, please add more detail when you create your world. KEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP IT UP!!!