The novel is good, minimum face slap, harem. but in the later chaps it suddenly became a cultivation world background and the women are like s#xs dolls, mc treat them as S Dolls, f there f anywhere f everywhere but everything else is good other than the later chaps
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Hi. Ur sci-fi story is interesting and it's descriptive which makes me read the next, next chapter. I nearly going to finish till 12chapters and I hope you will update soon : )
A great premise, not to boring but not too over the top, its taken well throughout the eleven chapters given and im sure the author is cooking with something. Though that said there is still room for improvement, like in every creative work out there, master your craft and dont give up dear author
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