I've read only 4-5 chapters yet So don't know where the story is going
I liked it but dear author what's with the pointless and needless use of Japanese words/verbs the totally make the story feel out of place
With a mediaeval western world building use of Japanese words makes me feel awkward while reading especially the use of word seishin or whatever which is important part of the world's power system As a non-japanese reader who completely doesn't understand the words' meaning it makes me turn my back on the story
I really hope you can change the use of Japanese words with more familiar English words or atleast translate those words into English
I give five stars to this book. The writer did so well, I love the book, the magic and everything single thing about the book. A big kudos to the writer
Guys, we've already reached 100k views! I know that it's not that amazing, but for me, this is one of the best things that happened in my life. I know it's shameless for me to rate this novel of mine like this but just let me have this one, okay? Let me give my thanks to all of you! Without your support, probably, I already gave up writing this novel. Thank you very much!
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I like the magic system in this story and also how the schools and rules of this energy are portrayed. It's only 8 chapters for today and they are short but the story has great potential
Read 20 chaoters : The premise and concept of this novel is good and well written. The only thing I can't accept is the author's blatant use of words which are contradictory.
1) He tells the 5 year kid is as mature as a youngster then that means he should be as matured as an adult when he turns 10.But the author writes that Belle and MC plays around when she visits him.
I've read the first few chapters and I got to tell you all that the high rating of this novel is not as high as the quality of the novel itself. This must be the author's first novel, so I don't blame him for it being so bad!! anyway, here are some tips to the author-
the mc has zero background and is supposed to five years old, yet sometimes he's smart and other times he's childish as ****.
the side character are not well written either.
there is no world building and we are introduced to the big shot characters in the first few chapters.
there are many other mistakes that I didn't mention that also need to be fixed, but I don't have the time to list them all.
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I liked it but dear author what's with the pointless and needless use of Japanese words/verbs the totally make the story feel out of place
With a mediaeval western world building use of Japanese words makes me feel awkward while reading especially the use of word seishin or whatever which is important part of the world's power system As a non-japanese reader who completely doesn't understand the words' meaning it makes me turn my back on the story
I really hope you can change the use of Japanese words with more familiar English words or atleast translate those words into English
I started college this year so I am a little busy with my school works so forgive me for the slow updates. Please continue to support so that I will be encouraged in writing this! Please leave some good reviews if you happen to have a time. Again, thank you!
1) He tells the 5 year kid is as mature as a youngster then that means he should be as matured as an adult when he turns 10.But the author writes that Belle and MC plays around when she visits him.
the mc has zero background and is supposed to five years old, yet sometimes he's smart and other times he's childish as ****.
the side character are not well written either.
there is no world building and we are introduced to the big shot characters in the first few chapters.
there are many other mistakes that I didn't mention that also need to be fixed, but I don't have the time to list them all.