please give some love to this story. It's getting better and better. Yes, there are grammatical problems, but I can still understand the meaning. So yeah, you just need to be a better reader.
I can’t with good conscience give this story a good review, the grammar is absolutely horrible, not bad, not very bad but horrendous, many mistakes and very poorly put together sentences.
The character feel shallow and fake, and the very poor grammar just makes it even worse, so far the world backgroubd is nonexisting so I am sorry author but please get better at english or have someone translate this for you from your language to english, as of this review I have read til chapter 12 and I gave up!
It's a good novel .it doesn't seem like that at first as there are many dramatical mistakes and plot hole but it becomes better as you read.you should definitely give it a shot.
the mc seems too naive and good hearted will it always be like this? or will he change ? i hate these naive mc's always forgiving. i bet he'll forgive his parents too who tried to kill him then he had to leave with his aunt to live in a distant village which caused his neighbour to die and aunt to get injured. but he will still forgive them i bet in the name of 'filal piety'. sigh i hope the mc dies and someone else reincarnates in his body. nice story but trash mc ruined it for me
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The character feel shallow and fake, and the very poor grammar just makes it even worse, so far the world backgroubd is nonexisting so I am sorry author but please get better at english or have someone translate this for you from your language to english, as of this review I have read til chapter 12 and I gave up!
Hope you get better!
01. Although the MC is supposed to be the Heavenly Dao Child, his progress and intelligence doesn't match that title.
02. This novel is being sold as a Xianxia, but there's a lot of unnecessary drama.
Okay, these two points cover everything. I didn't find the beginning chapters interesting.