Heaven Destroyer

The story has lots of potential but the MC is such a little bitch. I was expecting someone much more domineering after all the novels name is "Heaven Destroyer"  but all I got was someone who the author tries to force the "willpower" cliché on without any willpower to speak of. Guy literally has to have his plot armour jump in twice in the first 20 chapters. The author tried to make him seem ruthless but idk man, he seems pretty pathetic. I'm hoping he gets better but atm, I'm about to drop it

I read till chapter 24 and found the plot presented at first interesting and promising, with the characters that appeared with good construction.
The problem is when the story fell at the MC's hands and the 'oh-so' great intelligence started. Minor accidents really, stupidly revealing his identity (with the character not relating him to his race even after having just met one herself).
Then, as if having to nerf the whatever system of the MC so that he doesn't self-destruct, the author started 'correcting' many things like elements and even the Spirit of the system...
Sorry, but I will drop this as I'm already tired of forced development. thanks to the MC 'stupidity'.

Until now this is a good read. The story is well structured, the character/story development is also not too fast and it has constant updates. Not much is explained about the world until now and sometimes it‘s hard to follow since the grammar is somehow lacking a bit. The most mistakes you will see in this book will be vocabulary ones where an article or a verb is wrongly used.

All in all it has great potential and the only thing which could make the story better is a editor/proofreader to reread and correct the spelling and grammar mistakes.

I discovered this novel yesterday and i found it interesting so far.

Throughout the story i hope the novel as good and interesting.

I recommend this novel to all the fans of new stories.

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