Heartbeat Document

Not sure how a person who suddenly find himself in a new world quickly immerse himself into killing and fighting others. Other good novels will follow pattern of the protagonist getting a clear idea of his surrounding before going wild. Murdering someone shouldn't be so easy especially when it's the first time killing someone. Convoluted plot jumping from declaring a life and death duel with half brother to cultivation breakthrough, from running into a dangerous area with no experience to killing someone with no enmity.

I lik3 it so far I'm willing to keep reading  if it comes out trial reads. told my bro about he says it sounds cool so he may read it as well.

It's Good.You're not gonna drop this right?Like every other novel you wrote...........................................I dunno how to write reviews

Pls dont drop the novel :)......................................................................and more update :).......................................

what great disappointment this is😞1- this is a fanfiction of perfect world2- an mc who always complain and nag to system3- mc is stupid, is ignorance to surroundings and his own action4- bad translation and character building5- everything

I didn't like it because I read this type of novel too many time...but it's good. If you haven't read this type novel then give it a try.  

looked interesting and fresh for a few chapters. but i guess a bunch of idiots spamming comments about how it didn't fit the usual troupes and them believing that is how the world should work forced the author to change the novel into a generic cultivation one.

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