Hey, ever wonder what its like to see the MC be a fatty despairing for a girlfriend? Well you’ve come to the right book.This fatty realized his desires upon death and was gifted with a chance to go after them.No more shy guy, as this fatty uses the system given to work towards such a goal.From fat to flat, from starving artist to leonardo de vinci.Come watch this journey with an old man, for with the tasks this system gives will have you both rolling and thankful you are not him.Kudos on the translation to get across the great humor, and maintaining stable updates.The pace of the story isn’t the fastest, nor exactly slow either. Its just right to flesh out the accompanying characters alongside the MC.Perhaps the only tank in ratings would be world building as things are very centralized at this point in the story. Definitely a more modern setting comedy story based around slice of life, so no harsh critique from the world building perspective here.
This author deliberately slows the pace and makes you read the same scene twice over from 2 different perspectives to pad the word count. This could be a gem but the author is obviously experience at squeezing as much.money out of people as possible. I recommend pirating it or just not reading it or anything else by this author.
This book is the example of good ideas, but poor choices. You can clearly notice when the author switched from good writing to just pure s*x and dirty/lowkey s*xist jokes. However, chapter 741. I can overlook and cringe at edgy 13 year old humour, but what the author writes is borderline r*pe of the main character. His best friends get him seriously dr*nk, and the girl that had a crush on him for 'years' (An example of another forgetten storyline from chapters ~400) takes him to a bed. She when cl*mbs and makes red marks on the bed to suggest that they had s*x and guilt trips him next morning to have s*x again. This is not cute, and as someone that had a similar experience, the least the author could had done is given a trigger warning. I even wonder how webnovel would allow something like this on their site.
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"I'm fine, Ri-chan," Karin replied. In her life, Karin has never used honorifics to address her peers and those younger than her before, so her soul felt a bit uncomfortable, but the body was used to it though, and so reacted according to muscle memory. "Thanks for taking me to the nurse's office."
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