[Reviewed on: 26-09-2021]
[Reading status: 8 chapters]
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[Strong points:]
- The lighter tone is kept throughout the chapters, giving it a fully blended humorous style fused with cultivation genre.
- You must've seen many books with the particular fusion but what makes this book different (in my opinion) is the MC's savage personality.
- The author has improved visibly in crafting out an MC with the flaw and at the same time with the geniuses and clear aim. The MC is consistently sharp with his tongue and playful.
- Another aspect I laughed upon was the turning of cliches upside down, you'll know this when you reach chapter 5-7
- A reasonable amount of information in sprinkled in the initial chapters, which didn't make it hard to swallow that there are 3 girls with MC and a headmistress who is intrigued by him, along with the female receptionist who became chanted by him.
- Another good aspect are vaguely displayed double meaning jokes, however in some places it's stated in clear words. But the lighter comedic tone didn't make it appear cringe.
- I can foresee ha-rem (intentionally written like this cuz comments get deleted, it's a forbidden word) although I still believe that the MC is stuck with the 1st girl he met in chapter 1.
- The relationship of MC's parents is itself kinda amusing, and I was really glad to read a powerful mother instead of weak and oppressive one.
- The storyline is fused with 'system' too, which however didn't feel heavily influenced since it's a lo-li girl guiding the MC. Although the plot leaves numerous questions unanswered and to ponder.
- The narration is highly readable, as far as in 8 chapters I didn't see any flaws and mistakes. The chapters have something intriguing to say to the readers.
[Weakness:]
- As far as in initial 8 chapters, none!
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[Strong point: fast pace | adult comedy]
[Weak point: none in initial 8 chapters]
Perhaps my biggest issue is the lack of any descriptions of either settings or people. As a reader, you have no idea what any of the characters look like beyond some of them being simply described as "jade beauty". No hair/eye colour, hairstyle, clothes, places or settings are described, nothing about the architecture, décor, I'm not even 100% sure on what era this is set in or the current level of technology.
Additionally, up to chapter 40 at least, there isn't any real sign of an overarching plot, beyond some vague hints in chapter 1. There is some conflict with "young masters", however the face slapping is unsatisfying as the "villains" have no real build up or development. The protagonist is OP but there's no real sign of any intelligence behind his actions and no plotting or planning.
I can see why some people might enjoy it, but it's not for me.
Why are you reading my review, go read the novel. I promise it's really interesting. This is coming from someone that does not read cultivation novels.
before you read this author's novels- know that he abandons them in the middle. he stopped luck is a charm novel..........................................
Not bad for a story with only 5 chapters. managed to get me perfectly hooked. I don't think i've read a better first 5 chapters in any other books.
Keep going Author. Good Luck
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[Reading status: 8 chapters]
-.-.-.-.-
[Strong points:]
- The lighter tone is kept throughout the chapters, giving it a fully blended humorous style fused with cultivation genre.
- You must've seen many books with the particular fusion but what makes this book different (in my opinion) is the MC's savage personality.
- The author has improved visibly in crafting out an MC with the flaw and at the same time with the geniuses and clear aim. The MC is consistently sharp with his tongue and playful.
- Another aspect I laughed upon was the turning of cliches upside down, you'll know this when you reach chapter 5-7
- A reasonable amount of information in sprinkled in the initial chapters, which didn't make it hard to swallow that there are 3 girls with MC and a headmistress who is intrigued by him, along with the female receptionist who became chanted by him.
- Another good aspect are vaguely displayed double meaning jokes, however in some places it's stated in clear words. But the lighter comedic tone didn't make it appear cringe.
- I can foresee ha-rem (intentionally written like this cuz comments get deleted, it's a forbidden word) although I still believe that the MC is stuck with the 1st girl he met in chapter 1.
- The relationship of MC's parents is itself kinda amusing, and I was really glad to read a powerful mother instead of weak and oppressive one.
- The storyline is fused with 'system' too, which however didn't feel heavily influenced since it's a lo-li girl guiding the MC. Although the plot leaves numerous questions unanswered and to ponder.
- The narration is highly readable, as far as in 8 chapters I didn't see any flaws and mistakes. The chapters have something intriguing to say to the readers.
[Weakness:]
- As far as in initial 8 chapters, none!
-.-.-.-.-
[Strong point: fast pace | adult comedy]
[Weak point: none in initial 8 chapters]
Additionally, up to chapter 40 at least, there isn't any real sign of an overarching plot, beyond some vague hints in chapter 1. There is some conflict with "young masters", however the face slapping is unsatisfying as the "villains" have no real build up or development. The protagonist is OP but there's no real sign of any intelligence behind his actions and no plotting or planning.
I can see why some people might enjoy it, but it's not for me.
Why are you reading my review, go read the novel. I promise it's really interesting. This is coming from someone that does not read cultivation novels.
Go! Give it a shot! Read it!!!!
Keep going Author. Good Luck