Mhmmm... It's completely MTL, I can't even understand who's talking sometimes... There are many transmigrators and systems hosts... The book is confusing me too much... (My review)
Alright here we go. My honest review on "Gambit of the Living Weapon."The story has an intriguing setting and although I don't like to nit-pick but in all honesty. It kinda feels like a kid's story that has the feeling of Harry Potters/Berry Hooters (Which shows my memeafication to the book). But that doesn't make it a bad story, Oh no its funny. It funny as hell! I like it how you (Author: Breno_Ranyare) pulls a konosuba reference. My favorite character so far is Daren. Press F to pay respects. While Marceus is sounds like a naive boss that thinks he knows what he is doing at first then be that same boss who got bankrupted. Best fluff I've seen that went from immensely enthusiastic to incredibly depressed after 200 years. Bruh, even skips (from regular show) was 200 years old and is still positive in the end of the show. He even lost the love of his life!Minor pro-tip in writing. Try using other words that might sound fancy like Veracity or Robustness. It always will add a bit of flavour to the overall quality. The world-building isn't that much but at least it was comprehensive enough for me to understand. Overall, its still a good read and I had my fun with it. Now back to work. These chapters aren't gonna write themselves. T_T
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