Having written over 100k+ words, I can tell you that this novel is kinda slow paced. You might feel like things are happening randomly at that point.
The pace does go up a bit after around 50 chapters but it's kinda slow before that. Anyways, have fun reading!
This book is awesome just like other books the author has written, the plot is great and the grammar is nice and easy to read......... Not good with words but the book is recommendable. I hope you win the contest and if you don't, please do not drop it due to disappointment or whatever.
I give this the big good award.
Writing quality - havent found any grammar mistakes so 5/5 there
Story development - i like how the pacing has been til chap 15, not to fast and not too slow. just hope he doesnt skip his childhood years like so many others do.
Character design - they're good... it seems like. tho that might change once there are more characters introduced
World Background - sort of uniqe? idk it seems familiar but also not, but i dont have anything bad to say about it so its atleast good enough
looking forwards to read this book.
The only thing i might not like about it is that the system is not universal for everyone, then it feels like way to much of a cheat in my opinion. however i wont drop a good book because of something like that.
Gl with your writing author :D
up till chapter 40. very good pre reincarnation sequence. very uninspired post reincarnation, boring life boring magic boring Interactions. all of it lacks any spark of ingenuity and feels very generic. i know it probably gets better after a while but i just don't feel like suffering through 100 chapters just for a chance especially since nothing so far has shown any promis.
the grammar has been very good for what it's worth at least that's a W
This is something I would read any day.The plot looks promising and the system seems a tad bit unique from the normal ones. Furthermore the quality of the chapter is next level, the author makes almost negligible errors making this a fun to read book.
Things i expect in the future:
Character Development
Consistent Updates
Consistent Quality of chapter
Wish you all the best for the future chapters Author-san
This is, without a doubt, the best novel on this website. This novel is like a lighthouse that stands tall in a sea of endless mediocre works. Its light guides the way for readers like me to know what true art is like. When I read the first chapter, I had to close my phone and just think about life for a moment. That was how much this book impacted me. I had to stop my trembling hand from reaching for my wallet to give my life savings to the author. Despair, joy, defeat, success - this novel captures the essence of the human condition so well it's almost frightening. This book will truly be one of the next greats, remembered and taught in classrooms in the future.
As a person who’s never read a BlackFlamer wn, here’s my review:
Writing Quality: absolutely perfect, no grammatical errors.
Updating Stability: Great so far, but there’s like no chapters out rn so I won’t comment on that
Story Development: Only a few chapters out but pacing’s been perfect
Chara Design: Good so far, characters seem more than one-dimensional but there’s not enough chapters to talk about that kek
World Background: Not enough chapters for that, but it seems like there’s something, and that something’s pretty good
Overall, 4.4 from me
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The pace does go up a bit after around 50 chapters but it's kinda slow before that. Anyways, have fun reading!
Writing quality - havent found any grammar mistakes so 5/5 there
Story development - i like how the pacing has been til chap 15, not to fast and not too slow. just hope he doesnt skip his childhood years like so many others do.
Character design - they're good... it seems like. tho that might change once there are more characters introduced
World Background - sort of uniqe? idk it seems familiar but also not, but i dont have anything bad to say about it so its atleast good enough
looking forwards to read this book.
The only thing i might not like about it is that the system is not universal for everyone, then it feels like way to much of a cheat in my opinion. however i wont drop a good book because of something like that.
Gl with your writing author :D
the grammar has been very good for what it's worth at least that's a W
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Things i expect in the future:
Character Development
Consistent Updates
Consistent Quality of chapter
Wish you all the best for the future chapters Author-san
Writing Quality: absolutely perfect, no grammatical errors.
Updating Stability: Great so far, but there’s like no chapters out rn so I won’t comment on that
Story Development: Only a few chapters out but pacing’s been perfect
Chara Design: Good so far, characters seem more than one-dimensional but there’s not enough chapters to talk about that kek
World Background: Not enough chapters for that, but it seems like there’s something, and that something’s pretty good
Overall, 4.4 from me