GREED: ALL FOR WHAT?

Currently at chapter 35 and so far it didn’t disappoint me. Yea during the 1st 10 chapters the writing will turn you off( I gave up on this novel 6x b4 Ifinnaly decided to get past the second chapter) but it somewhat gets better,the Author said he’d rewrite the 1st few chaps so……

As someone whose favorite activity in games is build experimentation, I really like the theorycrafting in this novel. It feels like making some insane build in Path of Exile. While this part of the novel is great, there are some things that could be written better. Because the story is split into different "Legions," I completely stopped caring about the characters from Legion 2 when the author brought them back in later volumes. I'm also not a fan of switching the POV to "higher beings" just to shed light on their "grand plan." We readers should piece together that plan along with the MC instead. While this happens only at the beginning/ending of a volume, it's still annoying. The novel could probably be much more popular if not for the first 50 chapters, which discourage spending coins or fast passes on more chapters. My favorite idea in the whole novel is that you are rewarded for breaking the "rules." It also fits perfectly with the theme of the MC gaining power through his own actions and not by some stupid system or poorly written cheat.

very much like the novel, so plzz write until the end and i will be with u in this journeyAnd i am your loyal reader👍👍

I'm writing a review only for support.           Thanks to the author for his work, I would like more chapters and I ask the author not to repeat the same information 10 times in a row, it’s annoying  a a aa. A a a a a a a. A a a a a a a a a a a.  A a a a a a a. A a a a a a. A a a a. A a a a a a. A.  A a a a. A a a. Aa. Aa a. A aa. A. A a a a a a a. A a a a a a a a a. A a a.  A a a a a

Take this with a grain of salt, and see this as constructive criticism.

As a first time reader you can’t really take the words of an author at face value when they say it’s worth it or not when comes with their work.

You can’t really expect an reader who barely read enough of MC (due to the heavy amount of filter in the early stages of the book) to spend their own money to unlock chapters. who knows weather or not its worth it.

Based on the little amount of screen time the MC has before the paywall, I don’t think it’s worth it to continue reading due to problem of information or lack thereof.

Honestly seems like story more revolving around the Elf guy than the official MC, based on how he has all the basic qualities of a MC (insanely talented, transmigrated from Earth, creator of a system, etc etc) and everyone singing praises about him.

Look there as to be a reason why although it has well over a thousand chapters it’s so low on the ratings, it could be good for all I know, but the beginning ain’t what you wanna see on a top rated book.

Side note: You gotta delete those useless chapters, you are already limiting the amount of chapters you have to read, why do it more?

I think Soverick unknowingly captured me through the book into the void universe and I don't want to leave as long as Legion is still there.The background of the story is just so unique and other characters have realistic thoughts. There are other special characters that have main character traits in GREED, which adds to the uniqueness of the story.The story can spend a lot of time going through some arcs, but the writing quality always keeps me enjoying the story to the fullest.Overall this story is one of my favorite books with a unique plot, realistic characters, and philosophy to change your thoughts on sacrificing yourself for 5 exact clones of yourself to live. Every day I know that I can check and see that two amazing chapters have been released for me to read. Thank you for giving us this wonderful work of art that I can tell has a lot of thought put into it.