The story was good at the start, AT THE START!!! cool headed, have patience doesn't care about the world except her sister...the story goes downhill the longer it goes, and it starts when he goes stronger...I notice it when the tournament starts when Kyle Flare and Alex were fighting, his dialogue and lucas dialogue was pure idiocy. theres was no joker that was mentioned in his personality. The dragon, snake, and the phoenix were not a joked, and even if we say that he is a substitute, he should have the conscience of the original.(NO DUMB ENTITY) and not to mention JAMES that was also one of the personality which is smart, I cannot just fathom why did he become so dumb. and the latest chapters is just full of nonsense story...Maybe the author lost some of his drive and now satisfied with its downhill workss...
A fun read! I love how you can actually influence what happens to the characters. The story keeps you hooked, and it’s super easy to get into. Definitely worth a try!
This looks like a great story, the story is also very interesting, steampunk, magic of the four seasons, really impressive and unforgettable, I hope it can be updated soon, and keep the update stable, I will be your fan
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