I really enjoyed the story even though there are still many questions in my mind while reading, I still love it and can't wait to follow the development of the story and characters! as the story progresses I am more and more curious before I know it, suddenly I'm in the last chapter~
I wanted to like this. The author appears to be good at writing and has some creative ideas, but 1 the world just never developed.. it’s some sort of school but the teachers and school layout not only make no sense, they break the suspension of disbelief. I’m pretty sure a school, even a magic school can’t be run the way it’s written. Add to that a mysterious main char where all you get are a bunch of disjointed flashbacks to sort of give you an idea of who he is and you find a guy you just can’t relate to which was the finishing touch for me. Maybe it gets better somewhere in the thirtieth chapter or so, but I’ll never know cause I have lost all interest in looking further.I’ve often heard that you only have a paragraph or 2 to interest someone in reading your book. And a couple of chapters to get them hooked enough to read to the end. Took way to long and if this starts to be a book you need to pay to open chapters, it won’t work cause you don’t hook them before the paywall.Good luck with your next try
Good, story is good everything is good and if you like cold strong smart mcs give a read and hopefully is good enough to stand the passage of more chapters… since the others didn’t even make it past 20 *cough* keep up the work
This novel will be discontinued for a short period of time, Wait for updates and i will edit the previous chapter to add connection and great stability to he storyline!
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