What is the release rate of this novel? If its gonna be slow I d better not read it now and wait for it to accumulate a bit of content. Excellent novel though. Well thought out. Loved it. Expecting more.
I would say that I really like this novel, but I cannot do it for one reason, namely 18+ scenes, or, to be more precise, the lack of such in MC, it's just terribly uncomfortable for me to read the moments in which the MC observes other characters doing ***. Someone can say that MC is simply not interested in ***, but why then does the author poke these moments in our faces so clearly? The most unpleasant thing is that the author not only mentions the *** scenes, but partially details them, which makes these moments even more unreadable. And here you cannot use the excuse that this is only the beginning of the novel, since I am writing this comment at the time of the release of Chapter 75.Initially, I started reading this novel because of the harem and 18+ tags, but so far I have not seen any correspondence to these tags in this novel, except perhaps ntr.This novel has pretty good grammar and interesting character development, but I can't give 5 stars due to the above listed shortcomings.
It's definitely a comedy I'll give it that. Lots of trope jokes, kudos.It's enjoyable as a parody. Maybe have something to drink before reading though. Don't take it so seriously. Yeah the MC is a***wful and but this is not a compelling epic or anything- it's funny when you read too many serious attempts at this genre. My only major complaint then, are the walls of text. It's just a headache to read through.
That cant seriously be the end? So much more needed to be concluded! If that is seriously the end and you dont have a good reason for it then I hope you stub your toe everyday for the rest of your life!!
stop saying hurtfull thing to my novel and give a real critics that could make me grow. here! I give the low rating you guys want! if you want to insult anything just comment here! i will take all your insult! i am still a noob. but i hope you guys could be more understanding, i rather if you guys comment like daremyname that give low rating but with a reason so i could processing what i should do in the future. stop with shitty shit low IQ else. i give you guys a place here to insult me the author directly. i never bother if you guys give low rating, but a hurtful thing is still hurt for me as an author. I just want to cure my-self and have some meaning in my life, i know how trashy my novel is so i don't need your insult to remind me, what i need now is critic and advice that could make me a better writer. I just want to ignite my passion with this novel....
It is one of my fav kingdom building story so far.Writing quality is good. Story development is kinda slowly progressing but its okay. Love the mc character so far cuz He is not one of those dense mf. Most interesting thing about the story so far seems to be the world background. Its already stated that there are many other species who have crossed lvl 100 and may come to cause troubles in the future. I am specially looking forward to this event.So my fellow readers, if you are looking for a story with a clever and not a dense mc with a nice kingdom building and interesting future plot and also here and there a few lemon/cultured scene to brighten up the mood then give this novel a try. And keep up the good work author
Pretty good. Question: How powerful do you intend to make him?.................................................................................................................................................
'. . . "Gremlaine, when the day comes that fate has decided to tear us apart, hold onto this locket and wait for me." The man with the feathered hat placed a beautiful golden locket into her palms, before pressing her fingers against it; caressing the soaring bird engraved into its coat.
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