The story seems intriguing enough to keep going. The flashforward in the beginning sets up an interesting plot to stay interested. Good work! Keep on going!
Im excited for the future this story looks like it has alottt of potential , new chapter everyday though i would like some more lines form his mom since her personality was pretty funny
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evrythink is great until author tone it down/nerf,child of destruction who ve been prophecy will bcome a great being who can kill a god turnout to be a defect,it lead to a question does all the sheer out there also a defect? and then come the most clasic arc ,academy ....lol thats it going to the next novel,
I like how it doesn't take itself all too seriously and is quite heavy on the humor, some of the jokes might feel as though they're ridiculous which probably is one good way to stay bemused.
The magic in the series is unoriginal save for an interesting addiction as in casualty... which makes for a nice sprinkle of ungenericity.
The characters belong in the humorous world... although the prologue is quite not so humorous.
It would be great if writer-nim improves the quality of his grammar.
Not the best reads. Story is about a kid born with the will of the universe with the ability to kill gods themselves. MC is op genius in combat and intelligence even at his young age. The story lacks meaningful characters, not a lot of them are developed well, 1 is his FMC nanny and 1 FMC 2 with "a bigger plot".
The story starts off with a long prologue of what child of destruction is born and slowly transitions in to a school arc which I found unnecessary. Here, the MC flaunts his power and intelligence. Teachers and directors are mere toys compared to him and 99% of the students are arrogant young masters. So far, the academy arc is just a plot point to stroke his ego and show off his arrogance where there's a bigger plot to play but I can't find myself to go through it to find out.
This is good waiting for more chapters, the writings quality is updated which I mean great and the storyline is more creative. A good novel coming from q good author
The novel was good up unto the chapter where he was doing his magic awakening or something like dat, when I sad the chapter name about him maybe being a defect I wanted to drop the novel straight away but I changed my mind, I was gonna say how u gon give him a great background and then he can't awaken, but I also don't like the Character personality l, he hates them calling him a genius and almost gave up on his dream of being a swordsman cus a knight left
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And yes!, i'm shameless enough to give myself five stars.
I'm new to writing so i hope you all would support me on this journey.
I'm hoping for your review on what you think about the book.
Constructive criticisms are allowed too.
If you like it, please rate and share too.
Also, cut me some slack if you see any typos, i'd do my best to re read the chapters after posting so i can correct any errors.
Thanks for joining me on this journey of our Godlayer's Legend.
I like how it doesn't take itself all too seriously and is quite heavy on the humor, some of the jokes might feel as though they're ridiculous which probably is one good way to stay bemused.
The magic in the series is unoriginal save for an interesting addiction as in casualty... which makes for a nice sprinkle of ungenericity.
The characters belong in the humorous world... although the prologue is quite not so humorous.
It would be great if writer-nim improves the quality of his grammar.
The story starts off with a long prologue of what child of destruction is born and slowly transitions in to a school arc which I found unnecessary. Here, the MC flaunts his power and intelligence. Teachers and directors are mere toys compared to him and 99% of the students are arrogant young masters. So far, the academy arc is just a plot point to stroke his ego and show off his arrogance where there's a bigger plot to play but I can't find myself to go through it to find out.