Great read so far with very few mistakes grammar wise. World building could be expanded on but it is slowly being fleshed out. MC is kinda generic personality wise but the whole not logging out with everyone else is unique but brings about its own problems. I’m still wondering how he is paying his bills this whole time. Magic sword man is also kinda generic. Wish figh scenes were fleshed out more like in the beginning. Keep it up
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