very interesting and unique book. I like the system which is simple and the cultivation stuff are easy to understand. overall 10/10 story... keep up the great work.
I like the story but it has been around 50 chapters but I barely know about MC’s friends’ characters like they were his best friends but were introduced and suddenly left, nothing about what’s happening in real world. Where is his body now in real life since his soul is trapped and etc etc. Majority of focus is on him fighting monsters. Barely any conversation with characters other than Aurora. And this is all in constructive criticism. I still like the novel but I hope you would spend a little more time on creating a background of world likw what is happening around him, what are his friends and other people feeling around him. So that we can also dive into the world through your novel
I got asked at chapter 134 to make a review and this is my review.
Writing quality great.
Story development is also great but it seems like you forgot the shop girl who is the only woman who got his mother's "acknowledgement".
Character design is great except for the Mc's friends from the real world who I personally don’t want in the story. His harem and family is enough. The Mc is also to weak without his glove wich is the only thing I dislike about him.
Current updating stability is 2 chapters every day and that is absolutely great.
World background is interesting but Zach has said that he traveled to other realms with his father and he should have been able to train qi/mana there.
The game is interesting but the lower floors are boring and you know it. You even made him go into a sea realm to make it a little bit more interesting.
this is not fair author.... how can u write so many novels at once and maintain the quality? and why are the mc flawless in all book...
140 words... 140 words....
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Writing quality great.
Story development is also great but it seems like you forgot the shop girl who is the only woman who got his mother's "acknowledgement".
Character design is great except for the Mc's friends from the real world who I personally don’t want in the story. His harem and family is enough. The Mc is also to weak without his glove wich is the only thing I dislike about him.
Current updating stability is 2 chapters every day and that is absolutely great.
World background is interesting but Zach has said that he traveled to other realms with his father and he should have been able to train qi/mana there.
The game is interesting but the lower floors are boring and you know it. You even made him go into a sea realm to make it a little bit more interesting.
140 words... 140 words....