Overall, the plot is great. It really is entertaining to see Seong-Min grind so easily and there is also a huge anticipation of when he finally breaks out of poverty. The MC got that personality and story you just want to see him succeed. The progress is also okay, but I have to say it is a bit faster than I want. The sentence construction can be improved. But the coherency is there. A lot of readers might get turned by the way it was written, but I think the story itself is worth staying for. For our MC- he's obviously OP in the game and might never find a predicament where he might get challenged fully. I hope events to challenge his abilities in the game appears.
Hello Guys, The author here, I just want to thank all of the readers for getting us this far and I can't believe that season one just finished and I hope more people will be coming to read season two.
First of all theres a lot of issues but theres a lot of pros as well, its more rather a mindset story that changes whetever its good or bad from the reader reading.
The first chapter was so hard to read . I'm no expert but it dealt like 3 chapters worth of story shoved into 1 short chapter. I'm also sad to see it hasn't been updated in 10 months so even if Wanted to keep reading it feels pointless
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Over all great read so far and can't wait for more