Decent novel, Everyone makes it out to be a masterpiece but it's really not. There are grammar problems. The development is slow for my taste.
Not much character design you don't know a lot about the character.
Not much of any World background.
You should work on grammar and the characters a lot more if you want to improve.
I’m Normally into those ...heart racing, steamy oh my gosh so in love with the ml type of romances novels and/or those torture my soul with a relatable heartbreaking tragic romances... But to keep it all the way LIVE this is theee best novel and that’s out of my normal genre without a heavy romantic setting. Being a girl of course I’m a sucker for romance, but this novel was like a much needed vacation after a drama filled binge. The Introduction of characters is so refreshing, I can’t help but feel attached or relate to certain aspects in a character or moved by the dedication and fighting for self improvement. Even the fight scenes make you wish it was made into an Anime show, it’ll make you laugh and cry or make you cry from laughing, but mostly it’ll have you at the edge of your seat cursing the author for not updating fast enough!!!(ahah
Please please please please please please please please please please please please please post an update. It has been 8 months please. Your fans miss your writing
Time to thicken my skin, and toot my own horn!
If you're looking for an epically-scaled, breathlessly exciting, impeccably written Eastern Fantasy/Xuanhuan/Xianxia novel, you've come to the right place!
No, no! Don't press the back button! Ok, look, if that's not enough, how about, an adorable loli sister?
No, you swing the other way? What about a really, really cool senpai with silky, long red-hair who can kill thousands with but a gaze? No?
Okay, I see you're asexual. Oh boy, you're gonna love this, I know what gets your rocks rocking - an insane plot, a sick backstory, realistic characters, fancy weapons, an adorkable pet sidekick! Still NO!!?
Bah, I see you can't be saved. (But seriously, this story is gold).
Well, if you're seriously not interested, I still encourage you to give this a go. If you love it, that's another thing to look forward to when you wake up in the morning!
(If you hate it, please PM me, let's talk about it so I can become a better author!)
*saw featured original novel* clicked (because the cover and the title hooked me) thought, is this gonna be the same typical novel again ? (read the synopsis) oh i smell original plot. *Read the first chapter right away* .... in the middle of the 1st chapter, Suddenly press back, Me : "are you sure this an original novel instead of translated ?" (Read the coments) "oh. Its damn original." "F*** ! My lucky day !!!! No wonder god woke me up exactly 1:59 a.m. because of horror dream which i dont want to recall ever again." to think that i would found this masterpiece ! MUAHAHA IM BLESSED !
SERIOUSLY ! THANK SO MUCH AUTHOR !!! I SUPER DUPER LOVES THIS NOVEL ! ALL HAILL LORD POTATO !!! />\\\
Very good novel. It is an enjoyable and honest reading without any pretention. Similar to other cultivation works, the author amazingly made it his. With originality in his style and the delivery of the contents. It keeps getting better with time like a fine wine.
There is no filling unlike many novel up there, each word has it purpose. At the end of a chapter, instead of being like : "That's it ? But what just happened ? The MC just moved one foot and that's all ?",
I am more like : "Mmm, nice, pretty interesting, I hope it gets better, it deserves it".
Keep up the good work :)
Great novel so far, very well written, writer truly seems immersed in the love of his/her creation. Will be sinking power stones into it in the future. Would love to see this in the higher rankings! Namaste
The story is good! I scored it 5 for every point because it is just simply good!
The story and characters are nice, the broken speech of the younger sister is interesting!
So is the way the antagonist olots against him.
I wonder why you don't have more interest - probably because there's no hook or really cool thing to catch a reader in the title, synopsis or first chapter?
Maybe put 2-3 paragraphs of AFTER he has gained power at the start? Then flashback to the start of the story?
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Not much character design you don't know a lot about the character.
Not much of any World background.
You should work on grammar and the characters a lot more if you want to improve.
If you're looking for an epically-scaled, breathlessly exciting, impeccably written Eastern Fantasy/Xuanhuan/Xianxia novel, you've come to the right place!
No, no! Don't press the back button! Ok, look, if that's not enough, how about, an adorable loli sister?
No, you swing the other way? What about a really, really cool senpai with silky, long red-hair who can kill thousands with but a gaze? No?
Okay, I see you're asexual. Oh boy, you're gonna love this, I know what gets your rocks rocking - an insane plot, a sick backstory, realistic characters, fancy weapons, an adorkable pet sidekick! Still NO!!?
Bah, I see you can't be saved. (But seriously, this story is gold).
Well, if you're seriously not interested, I still encourage you to give this a go. If you love it, that's another thing to look forward to when you wake up in the morning!
(If you hate it, please PM me, let's talk about it so I can become a better author!)
Cheers
SERIOUSLY ! THANK SO MUCH AUTHOR !!! I SUPER DUPER LOVES THIS NOVEL ! ALL HAILL LORD POTATO !!! />\\\
There is no filling unlike many novel up there, each word has it purpose. At the end of a chapter, instead of being like : "That's it ? But what just happened ? The MC just moved one foot and that's all ?",
I am more like : "Mmm, nice, pretty interesting, I hope it gets better, it deserves it".
Keep up the good work :)
~☆♧YoloNatss♧☆~
The story and characters are nice, the broken speech of the younger sister is interesting!
So is the way the antagonist olots against him.
I wonder why you don't have more interest - probably because there's no hook or really cool thing to catch a reader in the title, synopsis or first chapter?
Maybe put 2-3 paragraphs of AFTER he has gained power at the start? Then flashback to the start of the story?
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