Godfather Of Champions

This started off fairly well and had me hooked. A guy transported into an Englishman's body etc etc. When Tony got going he had a lot of dominating games, losses and he gave a lot of halftime pep talks to his players then made spectacular comebacks. Then the novel quickly deteriorated into the repeat of dominating, losing against easy teams and SPECTACULAR COMEBACKS nonstop and Tony being an ass. Furthermore, the author is a pedo and Tony is also written as one being obsessed with a 13-15 year old girl throughout the chapters'. Yes, people may say he didn't do anything vastly inappropriate with her but yeah, no. She's still a 13 year old girl when this starts I think. It's sick.

Author is a disgusting pedo who gets off to sleeping with 13 year olds. The soccer part is great but it's very much destroyed by the authors raging hard on for an adolescent child .

This novel has a much better synopsis than the other one (soccer/football related) . I hope this gets published first.
At the moment it's last in the race we need more supporters.

At the moment the he novel is at about a 100 chapters, and I think it's fair to give it a review now. For starters the novel greatly exceeded my expectations. I expected some more lame-ass faceslapping, but for once I got a decent fan-fic. Yes that's right, fan-fiction. Lets be clear, this sure as hell is written by a football fan as fan-fiction, with tons of known players like fabregas, bale and Walcott making guest appearances, alongside some imaginary players. It isn't bad at all, in fact it's fairly decent, the plot goes on nicely, and it has a nice and peaceful atmosphere. It reminds me a lot of those kingdom-building novels, as that really is what it is. We watch Tang En, or Tony Twain, or TT as I like to call him build a football empire. We watch as he picks up to be pro players, and builds some players himself. It's a light entertaining read with some amount of info-dumping and discoursing upon football tactics.

Now on to the bad. Yes there are problems. Any and all conversations feel robotic as ****, and really weird. They don't sound like humans, but more like NPC's interacting. There are equally weird filler arcs, where our main character accidentally kidnaps a loli, and barely evades the FBI. Clearly filler. Character development can get weird at times too. In short the writing is fairly terrible. THe characters themselves however, do have personality. That itself is itneresting, though bound by stereotypes the author believes in.

This novel is missing some chapter ( Chapter 70-71 is a big time jump) around 1-5 chapter.

if this is how they do things I can't help but say sorry to but to leave this behind.

Man.. I think its a bad idea to release 2 soccer novels at the same time.. Its a conflict of interest. Also, tbh I never watch sports anime, so I don't want to read sports anime either. But... I really want to read the fish novel lol... It looks like a stupid novel that I would enjoy.


Also why am I supposed to rate when there is no prologue or anything given...?

Fix the missing chapters and get your story straight until then consider this dropped

No communication is sometimes worse than lies


Fillerfillerfillerfullerfuuuuuuu

This is missing so many chapters as well as the translator being slow as ****. Thinking that separating chapters into parts is good and that one chapter a day is good. The translator is a complete moron who knows two languages. The translator insults this work and then expects us to pay them in their Patreon. What a dumbass.

using the Chinese name instead of the English name is confusing. anyone his first meet with Shania? what chapter?

"Godfather of Champions" is an enthralling read that masterfully weaves a tapestry of compelling characters and high-stakes rivalries. The narrative prowess draws you into the world of elite athletes, where loyalty and ambition intertwine, leaving readers on the edge of their seats. Each chapter is a riveting journey through grit, triumph, and the unyielding pursuit of greatness. The author's ability to delve into both the physical and psychological battles makes this novel a captivating, must-read for sports enthusiasts and drama lovers alike.