Author broke his own world building in charter 1, had to correct by massively increasing the power of other characters to compensate, notices that that didn't work because MC is immortal and now has to somehow weaken the MC while not taking away his cheats.How someone who has traveled back in time and is immortal doesn't at least quadruple anyone in level at day 2 is the question, which the author answers by making the MC as low IQ and EQ as possible.
Novel yang bagus , jarang jarang nemu novel tema Vtuber inilah yang aku cari cari , pokok nya mantap lah thor di tunggu kelanjutanya jangan amoe drop / hiatus [Jangan ampe mati thor] canda :v
Novel isn’t bad but it is basically a copy of several other novels of take disciples to get stronger. Now my complaints are the novel is redundant in a lot of its sentences. The examples of this are when it says the mc took bottles of mixtures to make a mixture that is poisonous and another blatant one was the enemy is very powerful and its defense is shockingly powerful
I love this story, fun, interesting, logical, and so much more. Totally recommend reading this. Keep up the good work bro. By the way, you should make a Discord, or Patreon.
This is gonna be one of the best novels out there no doubt. just wait and see guys.Consider this first review as a word set in stone for future generations.
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