I will not be so shameless as to give full score, since I don't think my writing is professional, because English is not my mother language, and I don't trust my stability to keep writing chapters without stopping, I have experience with that, I don't think I can keep for long. But I'm pretty confident in my story as well as my characters. At the very least, I firmly believe that anyone who reads will be entertained by the story.
Hope you like it.
this novel has great potential, too bad that the author is not focused on it.
Author focuses on the novel because his novel is great has great possibility of contract with wn, maybe a few chapters in pa.tre.on while n has contract would not be a problem.
The writing quality is much better than most the books on webnovel. The thing that is lacking is that when I was reading the dialogues, it sounded monotonous to me. I felt like I couldn't see or understand the charcaters' expressions that time. Plot is much better and charcaters were nearly perfect. This is one epic harem romance novel if this is continued until the end of the book....
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I'm enjoying this work .. ..with good approach in character psychology ... Just little confused by world background, I'm having a hard time to imagine it. .. Anyway thank you
Im giving it a five star because every cahpter is entertaining for me and the story is not on the cliche side of start
But im very confuse in their emotional state
Author tend to contradict of what their saying and thingking to what theyre doing(you know the the i hate you but love you at the same time and the most important person in my life but not as a family and the most powerfull person then there is another that also the most powerful man in the world)
I might chage the rating in the future though
Good novel, good character design, but still could be better. I prefer your other work, Soul Eye. Was becouse of SE that I look for other work of you. And I think that you could finish SE first.
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Hope you like it.
Author focuses on the novel because his novel is great has great possibility of contract with wn, maybe a few chapters in pa.tre.on while n has contract would not be a problem.
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But im very confuse in their emotional state
Author tend to contradict of what their saying and thingking to what theyre doing(you know the the i hate you but love you at the same time and the most important person in my life but not as a family and the most powerfull person then there is another that also the most powerful man in the world)
I might chage the rating in the future though