Good story, but the MC becomes kinda dumb after loving that gaya. MC doesn't have the resolve to do anything to achieve what he wants. The romance is author's real life fantasies that he is writing in the novel. The romance subplot kinda ruined the story. The mc doesn't have to train he can just fight anyone without any prior experience is kinda stupid.
Overall a very plain writing style and story. But it is curious and even paradoxical that, that same plain quality helps somewhat the reading. The problem is that, as usual, and given that this is a story in the "modern world
a solid 5 stars for this book, got me tearing up in less than 5 chapters in, absolutely beautiful how you portray the emotions of the characters,giving them depth as if they were not characters in a book but actual humans, will be writing a subsequent review as the novel progresses
How should I say this, I enjoy the early chapters as it feel better in structure and goals despite a lot of plot holes.There are a lot of grammar error especially the "you, you are, your" family, it did not bother me that much as I'm non native english speaker but I need to call the author about it so he can improve his writting.The world background let say vague at best, there is not a lot being told or explain. There are some good and famous areas being told but not in great detail either.The characters design are rather bland with a little bit of interesting twist, but they are all pretty much did not have good development.The creatures so far are pretty much forgotten, like how the zombies can evolve but MC only evolve the dog -> wolf and that's it, nothing else. So the variety is extremely lacking.The story was thrown down the drain, I feel like there are a lot of unexplain time skip like how the MC all of sudden control pretty much most of the world within few days. How there is no opposition at all and how the author only touch minor characters that will change nothing for the fate of the world.Overall, I enjoy my time reading it but the flaws are obliviously as long as I use a little bit of brain power. Interesting idea, messy excecution.Note : I don't know if I want to continue reading this or not as the longer it goes, the less excited I got.
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